Constructive Criticism from Mrs Thrasher

Our teacher watched our extract, and evaluated the opening sequence to ensure our group was able to improve. She liked the variety of shots embedded in our film extract; such as the over the shoulder shot and close ups, which emphasized key elements. Another shot Mrs Thrasher took pleasure in viewing was the shot of the killer creeping behind the tree; stalking the protagonist. She also enjoyed the heavy breathing as it was a diegetic sound which related to the action occurring in the film.

The criticisms she issued was that there were a few odd cuts present throughout the extract. This enables us to improve our editing technique and hopefully improve our continuity. She also believes that music is essential as we have not perfected the sound element of the extract yet. Our teacher questioned if the point of view shot of killer from the tree works, therefore we will review this and decide as a group.